Saturday, January 19, 2019

SLJ, Picture Perfect- Week 2, Activity 3, Day 4

Today, My task was to create a story using the picture which is down below. Here is mine. 😁



As I climbed the steps to the place where I had been longing to take a selfie at since the moment I got here in Venice, I was starting to feel a bit nervous from the height and how dangerous this was going to be, but I decided I NEED this selfie. Soon I was starting to feel more and more excited with each step I took. "A couple more steps to go" I said to myself. Once I climbed the last step I scrambled to the very very edge of the platform. Making sure I got my face and the beautiful surrounding I clicked the button, "and... done". Very carefully I got myself out of the risky position I was in and made sure the photo was perfect and then I started to walk back to my B&B.



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Photo by HuffPost

4 comments:

  1. Hi caitlyn, I like your story. I like the part when you say I decided I need to take this selfie with the word NEED in capitals it made me want to know why it said that so I read your story.Next time you could maybe put at the start what you are doing so if people have not done this task they will know what it is about.
    good job
    Jess

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    1. Hello Jess,

      Thanks for commenting on my work. Yip, I will update and now and explain what I have been doing.

      Thanks,
      Caitlyn, :)

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  2. Hi Caitlyn

    This is a really great story and I enjoyed reading it. I can just imagine that that is exactly how this would happen. There would be so many tourist around the world that would be just looking for that perfect photo opportunity.
    I remember being at the blow holes at Punakaiki and watched a tourist go out beyond the rail onto the rocks just to take a selfie. I did think at the time he was mad! If a wave had come at that time, I'n not sure how it would have ended.
    I love that you have put the word Need in capitals to get your point across of just how much it was needed.

    Great short piece of writing.

    Well done Caitlyn

    Until next time

    Allie :)

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    1. Hello Allie,

      Wow, That would be quite scary to watch when they climbed over the barrier JUST to get a selfie. I know that I definitely would not do that. And just imagine what could of happened if a wave had came! That would of been really bad!

      Thanks,

      Caitlyn, :)

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Thanks for your positive, thought and helpful comment on my work.