Tuesday, May 30, 2017

My poem about Moss

The Moss

I love to grow on the hard wooden trees, growing
upwards pleases me.
As lush as a evergreen I like to be, the colour never comes out of me
As tall as a acorn I like to be, that way I won’t be so seen
I love to grow like someone has painted me because everyone will see me

As comfy as a cushion I like to be, but maybe I am too wet to be

I love to absorb water through my rhizoids, so I stay nice and clean     

I love to have lots of seeds, so everyone can use me for their needs

WALT: Understand why we are writing- what's the purpose and to shape and craft our ideas with effect. We will choose the most effective poetic devices to help craft out poem. We will use sophisticated parts of speech, We will have a simile or Metaphor, We will have some form of repetition, We will use at least one enjambment.


2 comments:

  1. I love the way you have used repetition in your poem. I think you could improve the line - lush as an evergreen by making it a metaphor. Keep up the fantastic writing.

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  2. Thank you, I will change it to a metaphor :)

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Thanks for your positive, thought and helpful comment on my work.