Monday, March 27, 2017

The Whales song

  1. The huge whales were bluer than the water and were as graceful as swans on the lake.
  2. When the whales jumped out of the deep dark water, they were like rocket’s in the sky.
  3. Lily watched in awe as the whales sang gracefully into the moonlight

WALT: Make our sentences better by adding verbs, similes and good describing words.

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