Tuesday, September 20, 2016

Animals in the zoo

WALT: Create an information report without any help and being able to go back and make it better.
Title: Animals in the zoo

Macro sentence:There are many animals from all around the world you will find in a zoo.

Macro sentence:  All zoo animals live in different enclosures suited to them, so people can safely see them.

Link sentence:
Lions, Pandas and elephants are some of the animals you will find in a zoo.


Pandas are chubby and large. They love to sit and eat juicy bamboo. They are also very soft and cuddly.


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Lions are large, long big cats. They have fur that is very shaggy. They love to sleep in the sun.


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Elephants are very round and heavy. They live in their
enclosure. They have skin that is rough and grey. They can weigh up to 6,000 kg.

Conclusion (Re-state the important bits of information about this topic)

Lots of people go to zoos to get a look at all the different animals safely. If we didn't have zoo's people would have to travel a long way to see animals that are in different countries. Lots of animals are not easily accessible to see.          

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